Steel CloudsSteel clouds rumble overheadwith iron anguish in their throats,screaming out their sorrowsin a deeply booming note.Nature pours her sorrowsin raindrops on my headas though she herself is mourningthat he is among the dead.They are her tears, this dampnesson my face. Her sorrowsnot mine that I can not eraseas a life well lived comes to an endand those left behindare left to pretendthat life goes unchangedand goes on without endwhen really it has, thoughjust for us, and those aroundtake no notice.
Open UpOpen up your world to me.Show me through your life.Let me see inside itthrough its darkness and its light.Air out all these secretsyou've kept them tight too long,and they'll never lie right on youunless you help them along.
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